Zethster gains ground.
It seemed more like a bridge, or sequence, because it never climaxed, it makes for an excellent loop and resemebles the structure of a final fantasy battle song, although I've never play much of it.
The percussion and beats were bass heavy and took chunks out of the orchestra whenever they slammed.
The guitars were a nice rugged touch, but in some instances, if I found myself concentrating on it, the pattern on it would take out the originality of the orchestra and add in repetitivity. It would be nice if died out altogether a minute in.
It was pretty short, I don't think the end did it much justice, but altogether, excluding the beats, it was pretty smooth.
You're not like a lot of composers, you know what you're doing, if you worked on the formula you'd have something everybody would be steering for in their project. Let me know if anything else comes out.