Ah.
Not bad for a transition, I'm a big fan of Big Beat, so I have good senses toward slower songs, the build up with good and the final version should be just as good.
My only criticism is that you completely lose the orchestra somewhere in the song and let everything else do it's stuff.
I could use some help from you, I need some reviews from fellow artists in different genres, maybe you can check out some of my good stuff later.